I hope you continue this,so far so good and i lovee rhea and Calixia those two top teir but everything is amazing, I don't know is it just me or the story stopped at the bird scene as well. Anyway I love the story, great writings author very talented. Hope for more I already put it in my collection
Interesting so far! I fully intend to go scorched earth and ruin my MC’s family, minus the youngest brother, if given the chance lol. Also had the same mid-chapter trouble others have mentioned.
I found that at the chapter two soup part, "The next course is much better—at least in visual. It’s a soup, thick and rich looking. A flower is placed in the middle. It at least looks appetizing. The smell is also promising." no choices or a next button appeared, lacking all but the story/text?
However I wanted to add that in chapter 2 during the dinner scene the game seems to freeze up/ the dialogue just ends. Specifically starting from the line "The next course is much better—at least in visual. It’s a soup, thick and rich looking. A flower is placed in the middle. It at least looks appetizing. The smell is also promising." it offers only one dialogue choice, a romantic one, which seems unrelated and unspecific to any characters which when clicked then goes to a blank screen.
If this is just because the game is still a wip/ this is just as far as the story goes for now then no worries, I just thought I'd let you know.
Curious to see how the rest of the story plays out! Take care
No matter where I load the game weather in browser or itch.io the dialogue for chapter two is missing? and not all of the choices show up either. ive tried uninstalling and installing again but no matter what i do its just not showing up?
I love the new little additions. And I seriously can't be the only one that wants to just snuggle in Daddy Barret's arms. xD (in a completely platonic father/child way...you perverts! >xO)
this is the first game I've ever commented on, and i just want to say it is absolutely spectacular. I've never hated sets of words on a screen as much as i hate the MC's "family"
ok i know there are only 2 chapters out but i love it???? the story is amazing so far!! i will say that there were a few errors with pronouns when you first meet calixta, but everything else was great :]
Im so glad there's an update. I just wanted to ask, like some other people have becore, whether the new upsate is meant to end after the tutor and pirate comment on the bird.
I love this story so much. The potential it has is crazy and i really look forward to our MC getting some actual support and affection..and revenge... 👀 i just am confused a bit at how chapter 2 ends? It kinda starts at the dinner but do each RO interaction end after the talk about the poor birdy?
hello, so happy for the update, just wanted to ask, does the new update end at the bird dinner scene? or is there more because if you sit with the fiancee, after the bird scene a new option pops up, something about a candlelight, where as the rest of the LIs do not. thank you
The MC's family, if you can even call them that, literally makes me want to scream every time they speak but Barret's warmth and fatherly love towards the MC almost made me cry.
I love the angsty start and all the LIs seem interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
I haven't seen any updates for a while. Is this game still in development? I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Also I really want an opportunity to kill Dalia lol.
I really like the plot and all the options to make your own MC. Can't wait to see what's next <3
PD: Can someone tell me which programe or engine is the author using? I've saw many others using something similar and I really want to try to make my own game. Thank you!
Pft...Honestly, in the MC's position, I would have used that dagger on Dalia the moment it was in my hands. Damned if I die for it afterward. xD His personality is so entirely different when away from his abusers. He's stoic, fearful but rebellious, and quietly seething against his family... (enough that he purposely pissed Dalia off during the 'celebration'.) But with King Barrett, his bethrothed, and the others...he's more gentle, friendly, and nervously subdued but hopeful.
I'm looking forward to hopefully more and maybe the chance to bring down our Father and Dalia someday (if that is Alek's goal. My MC is more then ready to wholly devote themself to their new husband and family and screw those abusive bastards related by blood to him. xD)
If I was the mom, I'd be vengefully cursing my husband and children from the afterlife for treating any baby of mine that way. A mother doesn't give her life for her child only for them to be abused. >8(
I know right?! Even with Adder's treatment of Reina, Dalia somehow manages to be worse than him. The way she happily hands you over to be abused by Astrite with a "They will do, yes?" (and that after I'd been getting along so well with Abrin, too!), made me want to stab her and do the opposite of what she said no matter how often she slapped me.
Personally, I don't like Aleks. But Barrett is such a sweetheart, that if he doesn't want to cancel the marriage or offer me Cal's hand instead, I'll go through with it, purely for his sake.
I would die for Barrett. He's been the perfect daddy-in-law that our MC needs. xD I tend to like the guarded and stoic ones in stories. Or the childhood friend.
Ugh, this is fantastic! Not to repeat what I said in my rating, but getting into even the first chapter feels like beginning an new fantasy/period drama that you just know is going to be amazing, an instant favourite! And I adore all of the customization options and the weight of the choices as well. Awesome work, and I sincerely hope you're as proud of and happy with how it is turning out as I am to read it! :) <3
(I also may not give a crap about Aleksandar at all - yet - but I would happily face a possibly murderous crowd for his father! Back off boys, he's MY dad now!!)
This has become one of my comfort games that I often go back to to replay. May I suggest princes or princet for genderneutral prince/princess terms though? Prin just sounds so... incomplete and unrecognisable. Also in the choosing title, the is/are variable should be tied to pronouns, not the title. Currently it shows like; "They is a prince, He are a prin" etc.
Hi !! this was really good. I got curious and checked out your tumblr as well. You mentioned that chapter two's ETA would be around June. Is it going to take longer or will it come soon?
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this is really fun and captivating!! <3
I hope you continue this,so far so good and i lovee rhea and Calixia those two top teir but everything is amazing, I don't know is it just me or the story stopped at the bird scene as well. Anyway I love the story, great writings author very talented. Hope for more I already put it in my collection
please I love this so much T_T but in chapter 2 it stopped at the bird scene help T_T
same for me!!
same TT
i LOVE the plot, and the characters all seem so cool!!
I love this so far omggg
Also Magical, can you please change the secondary color of this page to something other than yellow? It is impossible to read anything XD
For everyone wondering about the bird scene, it isn't a bug, just have patience!
how long we have to wait for the next scene to appear?
We just have too wait for the next update.
This story is great! I love the idea behind it and the execution is amazing! I can't wait to learn more about all of the characters!
The story's so interesting! I can't wait for chapter 2 to continue >0<
pleasee i need more
Interesting so far! I fully intend to go scorched earth and ruin my MC’s family, minus the youngest brother, if given the chance lol. Also had the same mid-chapter trouble others have mentioned.
Dose the game abruptly stop somewhere after chapter 2
It’s in the middle of chapter 2, during the meal.
I found that at the chapter two soup part, "The next course is much better—at least in visual. It’s a soup, thick and rich looking. A flower is placed in the middle. It at least looks appetizing. The smell is also promising." no choices or a next button appeared, lacking all but the story/text?
Hi, I've enjoyed the story so far!
However I wanted to add that in chapter 2 during the dinner scene the game seems to freeze up/ the dialogue just ends. Specifically starting from the line "The next course is much better—at least in visual. It’s a soup, thick and rich looking. A flower is placed in the middle. It at least looks appetizing. The smell is also promising." it offers only one dialogue choice, a romantic one, which seems unrelated and unspecific to any characters which when clicked then goes to a blank screen.
If this is just because the game is still a wip/ this is just as far as the story goes for now then no worries, I just thought I'd let you know.
Curious to see how the rest of the story plays out! Take care
i love this! ive been going down an if rabbit hole lately and this is easily one of my favourites <3 i cant wait for more!
when i get to the bird scene in chapter 2 though, my screen just goes white; is that normal?
Set the betrothed to be a woman. Wait until they realized the terrified wet cat of a prince they were handed is a whole ass fruitcake.
Barret is precious. my favorite character
I NEED MORE RAAAAAHHH
I love it! It ha been a long time since I got so hooked with an interactive novel, and it's just two chapters!!
No matter where I load the game weather in browser or itch.io the dialogue for chapter two is missing? and not all of the choices show up either. ive tried uninstalling and installing again but no matter what i do its just not showing up?
I love the new little additions. And I seriously can't be the only one that wants to just snuggle in Daddy Barret's arms. xD (in a completely platonic father/child way...you perverts! >xO)
this is the first game I've ever commented on, and i just want to say it is absolutely spectacular. I've never hated sets of words on a screen as much as i hate the MC's "family"
ok i know there are only 2 chapters out but i love it???? the story is amazing so far!! i will say that there were a few errors with pronouns when you first meet calixta, but everything else was great :]
I’m absolutely in love with this game
Im so glad there's an update. I just wanted to ask, like some other people have becore, whether the new upsate is meant to end after the tutor and pirate comment on the bird.
I think so, it says it's just a small content update...
barret, you are now my paternal figure 🥸
I love this story so much. The potential it has is crazy and i really look forward to our MC getting some actual support and affection..and revenge... 👀 i just am confused a bit at how chapter 2 ends? It kinda starts at the dinner but do each RO interaction end after the talk about the poor birdy?
i was wondering the same thing! i thought it may have been a bug but i guess irt just ends there?
Chapter 2 is not over yet! That’s simply all that's been coded in currently, sorry about that :’)
hello, so happy for the update, just wanted to ask, does the new update end at the bird dinner scene? or is there more because if you sit with the fiancee, after the bird scene a new option pops up, something about a candlelight, where as the rest of the LIs do not. thank you
The MC's family, if you can even call them that, literally makes me want to scream every time they speak but Barret's warmth and fatherly love towards the MC almost made me cry.
I love the angsty start and all the LIs seem interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
I love this so much!!!
I haven't seen any updates for a while. Is this game still in development? I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Also I really want an opportunity to kill Dalia lol.
I really like the plot and all the options to make your own MC. Can't wait to see what's next <3
PD: Can someone tell me which programe or engine is the author using? I've saw many others using something similar and I really want to try to make my own game. Thank you!
they make it in twine!
https://twinery.org/
Thank you so much!!! I'll see if I can find any tutorials on how to use it. It seems a bit tricky but I really like this format :)
This is so good Can't wait for more story
I like the intro for this, especially the angst. I hope there will be more angst and depression for the MC <3
I also like all the option to be cheerful, I don't know it's just fun to be detached by everyone gloom with being ignorantly positive LOL.
loving this so far, all the characters are so good I don't know how I'll choose
Pft...Honestly, in the MC's position, I would have used that dagger on Dalia the moment it was in my hands. Damned if I die for it afterward. xD His personality is so entirely different when away from his abusers. He's stoic, fearful but rebellious, and quietly seething against his family... (enough that he purposely pissed Dalia off during the 'celebration'.) But with King Barrett, his bethrothed, and the others...he's more gentle, friendly, and nervously subdued but hopeful.
I'm looking forward to hopefully more and maybe the chance to bring down our Father and Dalia someday (if that is Alek's goal. My MC is more then ready to wholly devote themself to their new husband and family and screw those abusive bastards related by blood to him. xD)
If I was the mom, I'd be vengefully cursing my husband and children from the afterlife for treating any baby of mine that way. A mother doesn't give her life for her child only for them to be abused. >8(
I know right?! Even with Adder's treatment of Reina, Dalia somehow manages to be worse than him. The way she happily hands you over to be abused by Astrite with a "They will do, yes?" (and that after I'd been getting along so well with Abrin, too!), made me want to stab her and do the opposite of what she said no matter how often she slapped me.
Personally, I don't like Aleks. But Barrett is such a sweetheart, that if he doesn't want to cancel the marriage or offer me Cal's hand instead, I'll go through with it, purely for his sake.
I would die for Barrett. He's been the perfect daddy-in-law that our MC needs. xD I tend to like the guarded and stoic ones in stories. Or the childhood friend.
Hello, is this on hiatus?
Update: just checked the Author's Tumblr and, for now, she's taking care of her mental health.
Ugh, this is fantastic! Not to repeat what I said in my rating, but getting into even the first chapter feels like beginning an new fantasy/period drama that you just know is going to be amazing, an instant favourite! And I adore all of the customization options and the weight of the choices as well. Awesome work, and I sincerely hope you're as proud of and happy with how it is turning out as I am to read it! :) <3
(I also may not give a crap about Aleksandar at all - yet - but I would happily face a possibly murderous crowd for his father! Back off boys, he's MY dad now!!)
This has become one of my comfort games that I often go back to to replay. May I suggest princes or princet for genderneutral prince/princess terms though? Prin just sounds so... incomplete and unrecognisable. Also in the choosing title, the is/are variable should be tied to pronouns, not the title. Currently it shows like; "They is a prince, He are a prin" etc.
That's a good idea! (Sorry for the late reply;'))
Hi !! this was really good. I got curious and checked out your tumblr as well. You mentioned that chapter two's ETA would be around June. Is it going to take longer or will it come soon?